First few lines of this poem came up during a conversation :) . I felt that this deserved to be developed into a full-fledged poem. So here it is. Leave your comments. Stay beautiful :)
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कुछ कहते-कहते रात निकल गयी,
सवेरा हुआ और जाने क्या बात निकल गयी,
दो अजनबी कुछ इस तरह मिले कि,
हर मुलाक़ात एक याद बन गयी।
मंजिल का कुछ पता नही,
पर रास्ते है कितने हसी,
क्यूँ न चलू मैं बेफिकर?
जब राहें हो सही।
रात की आस में दिन गुजर गया,
जब रात आई तो मौसम बदल गया,
कोयल रही है कूक, लगे है मोर थिरकने,
मन बावरे में तो जैसे सावन लगा बरसने।
कुछ कहते-कहते रात निकल गयी,
सवेरा हुआ और जाने क्या बात निकल गयी।
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9 comments:
Touching lines may make people think that its coming from someone who has taken a plunge into ocean of philosophy.
Joyfully interesting lines to read..
Keep the creative juice flowing...!!!
Mind blowing poem Nand bhaiya.
The setting is so beautifully expressed.
Bohot acchi poem hai...itni acchi acchi poems likhoge toh i will have a hard time deciding which one is my favourite one :)
Good one :) Don't keep yourself up all night!!
@Ruchi: Welcome to my blog. Thanks for your compliments. The ocean of philosophy is so deep, jitna neeche jao lagta hai gahrai badhati ja rahi hai. keep coming to my blog.
@Anku: thanks :). happy ki you like my poems. I would like to give u a tough time :). keep visiting.
@Sneha: Thanks :). Ab raat hai hi itni achchi ki, main kya karu :P
brilliant... :)
Thanks Puneet :). Keep visiting.
Nice composition.The sensifying explanation is beautifully provided.Let your writing inspiration and creativity soar!
Well done! I really didnt have much to do when I visited this link from your profile.
However, this was time spent beautifully :)
Thank you for such a read.
thank you anonymous. glad that u visited my blog :). Btw who are you Mr/Ms anonymous?
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